I received my edits last week and spent some time implementing the notes my editor, @texasbookmama, gave and some feedback I received from family and friends.

I condensed my opening, closed a plot hole, and expanded upon the world and characters. It is so important for us writers to work together and get constructive criticism from the people in our lives.

Thanks to them, this will be a much stronger manuscript and I hope it will show as I reenter the query trenches.

Stay tuned for a new Query Letter for The Pretender Queen and more details about the Realm of Astros.

See you guys soon!

Ren Wayland

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